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Story for submission to #screamprompts for prompt #12.
The phrase "My wife doesn't know..." occurs before before word 100. (rules #1 & #2)
There are exactly 1000 words, not counting scene markers. (rule #3)
There is "bad news" that the wife doesn't know, and it's of questionable resolution. (possible violation of rule #4)
I'd love to hear any comments or criticism from anyone, not just from #screamprompts!
The phrase "My wife doesn't know..." occurs before before word 100. (rules #1 & #2)
There are exactly 1000 words, not counting scene markers. (rule #3)
There is "bad news" that the wife doesn't know, and it's of questionable resolution. (possible violation of rule #4)
I'd love to hear any comments or criticism from anyone, not just from #screamprompts!
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I really enjoyed the first parts but the ending seemed a little predictable and lacking, but still I like your style of writing its got a nice flow to it.